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divergent fanfiction
This is my first fanfiction :D I am from the Netherlands, and I am 13 years old. I have read Divergent but in Dutch, not in English. I am good at English but not the best, I am really sorry if I don´t spell a word good, or if I make a really weird sentence. I don´t own divergent, it´s from Veronica Roth.
POV Beatrice:
Today is the Choosing Ceremony. I´m gonna choose Abnegation. After I finished my Aptitute Test Tori told me that I was Divergent. I can choose Erudite, Abnegation and Dauntless. I hate Erudite and I don´t want to leave my family behind.
¨Caleb Prior¨ Marcus Eaton says. He gives Caleb a knife and Caleb walks to the Abnegation bowl. He cuts his hand and his blood falls on the gray stones. ¨Beatrice Prior¨ I walk to Marcus and he gives me the knife. I walk to the abnegation bowl. My hands shake when I cut my hand. I let my blood fall on the stones. I am almost Abnegation now, I only need to finish the initiation and I am a real member.
Today is the first day of the initiation. We need to help the factionless, but first we eat some breakfast. I sit next to Caleb, across me sits a girl transferred from candor. ¨hey¨ the girl says. ¨what are your names?¨ She asks. ¨I am Caleb and this is my sister Beatrice¨ ¨Okay, cool. My name is Christina.¨ ¨Nice to meet you Christina¨I say. ¨nice to me you guys too¨ she says. ¨Attention everyone¨ I hear someone saying. I turn around and see it´s Tobias Eaton, our instructor. He is the son of Marcus Eaton, His father and my father are friends, but I never talked to Tobias before. ¨We are gonna help the factionless today¨ ¨The whole day?¨ Christina asks. ¨Yes, this is Abnegation, we help the factionless.¨ Tobias says. ¨Okay, everybody make 3 groups, with 5 people in it. You are with 14 people so I´m gonna join one group and then we are going to the factionless!¨ I´m in a group with Caleb, Christina, Sam and Tobias. ¨Okay guys¨Tobias says ¨we are gonna give the factionless some food, uhh Christina, Sam and Caleb you´re gonna give them some bread and Beatrice you can come with me, we´re gonna give them some fruit¨ I walk after Tobias, we walk into a bick freezer. He gives me a box with apples in it. ¨follow me¨ he says.
Okay this was my first fanfiction ever :D hope you liked it, I´m gonna write the next chapter in the POV from Tobias :) xx
POV Beatrice:
Today is the Choosing Ceremony. I´m gonna choose Abnegation. After I finished my Aptitute Test Tori told me that I was Divergent. I can choose Erudite, Abnegation and Dauntless. I hate Erudite and I don´t want to leave my family behind.
¨Caleb Prior¨ Marcus Eaton says. He gives Caleb a knife and Caleb walks to the Abnegation bowl. He cuts his hand and his blood falls on the gray stones. ¨Beatrice Prior¨ I walk to Marcus and he gives me the knife. I walk to the abnegation bowl. My hands shake when I cut my hand. I let my blood fall on the stones. I am almost Abnegation now, I only need to finish the initiation and I am a real member.
Today is the first day of the initiation. We need to help the factionless, but first we eat some breakfast. I sit next to Caleb, across me sits a girl transferred from candor. ¨hey¨ the girl says. ¨what are your names?¨ She asks. ¨I am Caleb and this is my sister Beatrice¨ ¨Okay, cool. My name is Christina.¨ ¨Nice to meet you Christina¨I say. ¨nice to me you guys too¨ she says. ¨Attention everyone¨ I hear someone saying. I turn around and see it´s Tobias Eaton, our instructor. He is the son of Marcus Eaton, His father and my father are friends, but I never talked to Tobias before. ¨We are gonna help the factionless today¨ ¨The whole day?¨ Christina asks. ¨Yes, this is Abnegation, we help the factionless.¨ Tobias says. ¨Okay, everybody make 3 groups, with 5 people in it. You are with 14 people so I´m gonna join one group and then we are going to the factionless!¨ I´m in a group with Caleb, Christina, Sam and Tobias. ¨Okay guys¨Tobias says ¨we are gonna give the factionless some food, uhh Christina, Sam and Caleb you´re gonna give them some bread and Beatrice you can come with me, we´re gonna give them some fruit¨ I walk after Tobias, we walk into a bick freezer. He gives me a box with apples in it. ¨follow me¨ he says.
Okay this was my first fanfiction ever :D hope you liked it, I´m gonna write the next chapter in the POV from Tobias :) xx
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